Glad she stood up to him!!
I really like that she didn't just shrink to him acting like that. I have a feeling he's going to fight back though. What an ass.
Oooh, I love what a strong female character Alexandria is! I'm glad she gave it to Josh, and I can't wait to see if she does it somemore!!!
"Come, now!"Ah, someone should learn the difference between a human being and a dog. Great job!
I find myself punching my fist into the air, screaming- YOU GO GIRL!Hehe, great teaser
I loved the way Alexandria handled him. Especially when she stood up--that how things roll.GREAT teaser. Can't wait to see more of Alexandria
Hey there! Go, girl power! Lol. I like the line about the niggling doubts mushrooming into vivid realization--nice. Also, don't forget to use contractions in your dialogue when you go back and revise--makes it sound much more authentic! :)Nice job!
*waves pom-poms*WOOHOO! That's how it's done. :D
Great struggle/power scene here. Totally rooting for your MC. Nice!
I cannot see that ending well. I once dated a guy as possessive as that, wish I had had the courage to stand up to him like your MC.
Nicely done--again! I keep wondering what's going on here and what will happen. You're very good at creating tension.
Ooh, I like how Alexandria isn't letting him boss her around!Sorry I was so late getting to this :D