Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Teaser Tuesady

I am giving more of Alexandria, Josh and Aris since they seemed to be popular last week. This scene happens a couple of weeks before last week's teaser:

12 comments:

  1. I really like that she didn't just shrink to him acting like that. I have a feeling he's going to fight back though. What an ass.

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  2. Oooh, I love what a strong female character Alexandria is! I'm glad she gave it to Josh, and I can't wait to see if she does it somemore!!!

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  3. "Come, now!"

    Ah, someone should learn the difference between a human being and a dog. Great job!

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  4. I find myself punching my fist into the air, screaming- YOU GO GIRL!
    Hehe, great teaser

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  5. I loved the way Alexandria handled him. Especially when she stood up--that how things roll.

    GREAT teaser. Can't wait to see more of Alexandria

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  6. Hey there! Go, girl power! Lol. I like the line about the niggling doubts mushrooming into vivid realization--nice. Also, don't forget to use contractions in your dialogue when you go back and revise--makes it sound much more authentic! :)

    Nice job!

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  7. *waves pom-poms*

    WOOHOO! That's how it's done. :D

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  8. Great struggle/power scene here. Totally rooting for your MC. Nice!

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  9. I cannot see that ending well. I once dated a guy as possessive as that, wish I had had the courage to stand up to him like your MC.

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  10. Nicely done--again! I keep wondering what's going on here and what will happen. You're very good at creating tension.

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  11. Ooh, I like how Alexandria isn't letting him boss her around!

    Sorry I was so late getting to this :D

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