Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Teaser Tuesady

Okay, I teased. As always this is rough and written yesterday.

edited: served it's purpose.

7 comments:

  1. Josh is a cock block (pardon my French)!! I felt the tension in the last paragraph. Can't wait to find out what happens next. :D

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  2. ohh I love the deep vibrations! Ugh I mean I like how that sounds in your story!

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  3. “Yeah, I do. It feels,” she paused, “powerful.”

    Okay, that's not a produce of my dirty mind! lol, Great Job!

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  4. Oooh. I like. Great dialogue!

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  5. Very short, but very descriptive -- you managed to do a lot with only a few lines. Good job!

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  6. Darn Josh! I was really feeling the connection between Aris and Alexandria :3 Can't wait to see more!

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  7. Brilliantly written, really looking forward to reading more.

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