Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Teaser Tuesday

This excerpt is from the first time Larch and Stone have a sparring session. He doesn't like her because he is prejudiced, against clones, although Larch is not your typical clone. Ignore writing oops, this is NaNo and has no editing. Stone's POV.

I got up and we began circling each other again. We punched, kicked and blocked over and over. It didn’t matter what strategy I used, she blocked every move. I couldn’t let her knock me on my ass again. She’d done it twice already.

I feinted right and dropped to the ground. She lost her balance and I finally got a punch in.

She was tough, I’d give her that. She spun around with a roundhouse kick that cracked into my jaw and I went down. She walked over and looked down at me. She probably thought she knocked me out. I scissored out my legs and caught her around the waist and flipped her onto the mat. I was up in a second and fully stretched out on top of her. My six foot frame completely covered her small, five feet and I could feel how soft she was.

We were both breathing hard. Her lips were in the perfect spot for me to kiss. I forgot she was my assignment for a few minutes.

She looked up at me in surprise. Then her eyes began to darken and I could feel her heartbeat speed up. It had nothing to do with our sparring session.

“You think you won Stone?” she whispered and licked her lips.

“Oh yeah, Princess. I got you down and I’d call that a win.” I felt blood rushing through my body and did not want to move. The only thing I wanted to do was kiss her long and hard.

11 comments:

  1. Holy crap! That was great! I love scenes that start out with some good fighting and end up on the ground with lots of sexual tension! You definitely captured that in this teaser!

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  2. Awesome! Sexual tension is always fun.
    I'm so intrigued by the premise of this story, too.

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  3. Very tense at the beginning!
    Loved the smexiness near the end ;)

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  4. Interesting last paragraph. And I think I said this before, but it's been a while since I read a good book about clones, so I'm really interested in reading yours.

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  5. Human/Clone love fest!? Awesome. Can't wait till you share more!

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  6. HAHA, awesome!! I love how all the fighting is like foreplay, you naughty girl! Man, she sure knows how to beat the snot outta someone! We need more tough girls out there!!

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  7. WOW!!!!! HAWT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job Herbie!! I love smexual tension :D esp from the male POV. Awesome job

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  8. Wowowow~ I love the fighting/kiss contrast! I've never tried a fight scene - you handled it well. Great job!!

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  9. DAAAANG! I loved this so much! The fighting was intense and the smexiness afterward was even more intense! Nice job!

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  10. I am also loving the sexual tension. The premise draws me in. I really want to know more about your WIP. Good teaser!

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