tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597301924316814888.post5895772522975762714..comments2023-06-19T08:56:11.616-04:00Comments on Random Ramblings: Teaser TuesdayJ.S. Woodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09231458559331295121noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597301924316814888.post-48071848007854936772010-03-25T10:03:00.001-04:002010-03-25T10:03:00.001-04:00Damn. That made me cringe. Lol and I'm a guy h...Damn. That made me cringe. Lol and I'm a guy haha! But yeah, I feel bad for you MC. Totally bad. Will she have an abortion then?Glen Akinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647296775230237162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597301924316814888.post-7161073021324720032010-03-24T01:27:23.074-04:002010-03-24T01:27:23.074-04:00Awwww Makes me sad for her, but that means you'...Awwww Makes me sad for her, but that means you're going in the right direction I think :D Love it! :DAnnie McElfreshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14312634754232333138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597301924316814888.post-65593665113347958212010-03-23T21:09:49.461-04:002010-03-23T21:09:49.461-04:00I LOVE their chemistry. It's adorable. I feel ...I LOVE their chemistry. It's adorable. I feel for her so much :( Poor babyLizPagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07863167617453436250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597301924316814888.post-17700365005305367932010-03-23T20:36:31.047-04:002010-03-23T20:36:31.047-04:00Loved the dialogue. This is a tough situation. You...Loved the dialogue. This is a tough situation. Your poor MC. :( <33Rebecca A. Rogershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14124059241043445352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597301924316814888.post-15919572068235932452010-03-23T16:11:39.462-04:002010-03-23T16:11:39.462-04:00I loved, loved, loved this! It was funny, and &quo...I loved, loved, loved this! It was funny, and "You failed two tests..." is the awesomest line ever! Their friendship seems very interesting and fun. I want to know who the father is. <br /><br />More, more, more!Remilda Graystonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13649300813621588790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597301924316814888.post-54797776760485461432010-03-23T15:25:53.936-04:002010-03-23T15:25:53.936-04:00Oooh... ouch. But still, the last line is fantasti...Oooh... ouch. But still, the last line is fantastic.Caitlin R. O'Connellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10783453696462112780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597301924316814888.post-4539944876759863032010-03-23T13:07:53.407-04:002010-03-23T13:07:53.407-04:00Awww I feel so sorry for your MC. I like her voice...Awww I feel so sorry for your MC. I like her voice though. :)Karla Calalanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17414349286625200655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597301924316814888.post-85540391229415882112010-03-23T13:04:01.381-04:002010-03-23T13:04:01.381-04:00Aww...poor Lillian. I want to know who the baby d...Aww...poor Lillian. I want to know who the baby daddy is..is it this Sanjay? or some random hot guy? Keep writing!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13612218172442721987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597301924316814888.post-20823858627628459832010-03-23T13:02:31.260-04:002010-03-23T13:02:31.260-04:00I loved this. I mean I feel for your poor MC but t...I loved this. I mean I feel for your poor MC but the scene is done with such honesty, and it says a lot about their friendship. Loved it!Writing Writerly thingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17184023954656057661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4597301924316814888.post-62681211523922315472010-03-23T12:37:53.393-04:002010-03-23T12:37:53.393-04:00This line: "You failed two tests..." Sho...This line: "You failed two tests..." Shows exactly how they feel about it. It's perfect!Véro Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02437660016137470145noreply@blogger.com